Ad 1 second draft video

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jjvMBaJCtA

After my Media studies teacher watched this sequence I then got he feedback that I needed to improve this first draft...

- Remove shot one

- shorten shot two

- shot three is fine

- Remove shot of the perfume in the tree and re-shoot it

- remove shot five

- shorten shot six

-shot seven is fine

- shot eight is fine

- shot ten could be shorter

- Remove shot of the prince and re-shoot it ( lewis needs to be looking into the camera with a smile on his face, as if he is looking at the princess so this could be a p.o.v shot)

- shot twelve is fine

- shot thirteen is too slow, speed it up a bit

after the fade out to white at the end there needs to be the perfume title and the remaining image of the product.