Here is my first draft of my first advert:
After my Media studies teacher watched this sequence I then got he feedback that I needed to improve this first draft...
- I need to have close ups of the characters faces, otherwise the audience won't have any real connection with the characters
- Continuity...
e.g. the scene where the prince is grabbing the apple from the tree he is using his right hand, the next shot he has it in his left hand.
- I need to make the cuts and shots flow much better, some scenes are much too slow and some are quicker than they need to be
- I need to include music, the music must fit in with whats happening on screen
- At the end of some scenes the screen goes black from where I had stopped the film on the camera...
This has helped me to understand how to improve my filming, I need the keep the camera running a few more seconds after the scene is filming.
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